Thursday 1 July 2010

A New Song - With One Eye

OK This is my unfinished song...tell me what you think so far....

-With One Eye-

Why do I cry,
With one eye,
When I try,
To defy, the fact,
That I won't be with you,

What us the point,
In this joint,
I'll appoint,
Some new friends,
To take the load,

I know I'll never I'll never be with you,
So why do I even try,
But if you ever leave me,
I know I'll certainly die,
I've been so close before,
I won't go there any more,
I've learnt my lesson already,
Please don't disappear,

So,
Tell me,
Why do I cry,
With one eye,
When I try,
I'm too shy,
Just don't lie, You,
Don't Really love me...



That's all I'm afraid ^.^

3 comments:

  1. thats a very emotional song. Write the rest of it please.

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  2. Wow! You've written a song? I'm very impressed! I'm a pianist, and I love to try an compose cool songs. I'm just not a very good singer. When did you first start writing songs and stuff?

    Reply to my blog please in my Random Comments section. My Blog is:
    http://moranmustangs.org/jeffreyp/

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  3. hey thats a cool song! you a beginner or have you been writing for a while?check out my blog at ameliaw2018.edublogs.org

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